First cut feedback

From our first cut, we received a range of feedback. The majority of which were positive and helpful for us to develop our piece and steer it in the best direction possible. One comment stated that our shot transition had "perfect timing". On top of this, another viewer told us that it was very "fluent". Both of these comments combined showed us that not only was our timing good in our first cut, but that it was also key that we continue to focus on having excellent, smooth shot transitions.
A criticism we received was that the font type we chose for our credits "didn't seem to fit the conventions of the thriller genre". As a result of this, we have changed the font and altered its size and positioning. We hope this will convey the thriller genre better. We were aware that our sequence lacked length, and we knew this was a result of our lack of time. It was brought to our attention that we needed to add more of or filming before we continue to edit, to guarantee our film increased in time.